Solitude

spartanx5 · Post by **spartanx5** » Fri Mar 21, 2008 4:41 am

http://dangerstner.deviantart.com/art/Solitude-80584827

I have promised to do this for probably two years now, its just something always came up, be it injuries, liver failure, family, girlfriend, but yesterday morning I set myself on a goal to work on this until it was finally finished. Well I really don't know how many hours it has been, but I hope you all enjoy this as much as I do.

Cobain · Post by **Cobain** » Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:30 am

its ok i guess

spartanx5 · Post by **spartanx5** » Fri Mar 21, 2008 5:34 am

Cobain wrote:its ok i guess

Mind telling me what you don't like?

Senor_Grunt · Post by **Senor_Grunt** » Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:26 pm

<333 This.

Tural · Post by **Tural** » Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:29 pm

I don't see anything special about it. For it to take as long as you described, I would imagine a more compelling result.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:33 pm

I might have liked it if it were more properly rendered. Plus the overlaying effects ruin what could have been. Put it all together and you lose almost all helmet depth.

spartanx5 · Post by **spartanx5** » Fri Mar 21, 2008 2:49 pm

Thank you for your honesty, I'm starting not to like it as much either, it does not convey the emotions that I had intended, nor was it executed as I had drawn in old concepts. I plan on remaking all of it in much higher quality and more realistic, this is not what I had wanted but in my desperation in cramped time I did not give it my best .Dramatic I know but I was working non-stop and should have taken time to sit back an analyze things. I'll use actual 3d particles this time around and completely remake the helmet.

Any more criticisms or suggestions would be greatly appreciated so I can have a better result next time around.