Talent T.V. Flyer

Trulife8342 · Post by **Trulife8342** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:32 pm

A company that I am doing graphics for (if you live in south florida you'll see these posted up everywhere)

CabooseJr · Post by **CabooseJr** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:12 pm

I don't really like the name of it. "Make is happen." It sounds corny.

Trulife8342 · Post by **Trulife8342** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:22 pm

thats their motto they said they wanted it there.

MoDFox · Post by **MoDFox** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:05 pm

It's hard working with companies, they set guidelines, and you HAVE to follow the guidelines or you may get fired.

halobuddha · Post by **halobuddha** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:44 pm

true but all corny mottos aside its nice work. Really pleasing.

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:54 pm

Something about it just doesn't really feel...professional.

Tural · Post by **Tural** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:55 pm

It's not contrasted enough. It's all faint and such. It doesn't really strike me as a professional ad.

Aumaan Anubis · Post by **Aumaan Anubis** » Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:05 pm

The grammar in the top part of the ad annoys me...

"If you have the looks and the talent that it takes to be a model you need to come to Make it Happen productions and have your world changed"

Punctuation plz?

Trulife8342 · Post by **Trulife8342** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:45 am

its just a flyer just like when a club passes out those little promotions and shit this is the same thing, and the text was just a place holder they will modify that so forget the text, but everything else was exactly how they wanted it.

Ombre · Post by **Ombre** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 12:27 pm

Those all your vectors?

Trulife8342 · Post by **Trulife8342** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 12:50 pm

No I have more, and if your asking if they belong to me no, the ones that do are the ones on the lower left corner, And I also asked permission so no need to jump on me for that.

WaywornMmmmm · Post by **WaywornMmmmm** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 12:59 pm

Tural wrote:It's not contrasted enough. It's all faint and such. It doesn't really strike me as a professional ad.

Dr.Cox · Post by **Dr.Cox** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:26 pm

I cant see this being on the streets it looks to busy. Your drawing attention away from the real advertisement with pretty vectors and colours.

Oh, and in my opinion, the flyer needs to represent what its advertising.

It needs a Hot bod on there or something that represents the company.

JacksonCougAr · Post by **JacksonCougAr** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:41 pm

It strongly reminds me of the Zune software.

I agree that it does not really give you a good idea of what it should be representing. I at first thought it was about computer modelling.

Also the text in the middle is very funny looking, and all in all the attention is not being drawn to the text but instead the vectors.

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:24 pm

Whatevs. It's probably for some Wict out Glamour shots place where they hide all their mistakes by making it super foggy like the Barbara Walters Shots. And Since when do you need Talent for Modeling?

All seriousness now, The font Choice. The key rule is try to minimize the amount of typefaces used(Maximum 3). The All Caps and the "Modeling" part make it look like two different fonts, and it just doesn't seem right.

preston566 · Post by **preston566** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:36 pm

Looks cool to me. Well, then again, it's me.

Ombre · Post by **Ombre** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:39 pm

Cuda wrote:And Since when do you need Talent for Modeling?

There are methods to sticking your fingers down your throat, it takes practice and great patience.

Cuda · Post by **Cuda** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 6:21 pm

Ombre wrote:
Cuda wrote:And Since when do you need Talent for Modeling?
There are methods to sticking your fingers down your throat, it takes practice and great patience.

Heh, from what I've been told by one of the girls Water Polo players, a Sponge on a stick works too.

Ombre · Post by **Ombre** » Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:03 pm

Anyways, about the piece. If the client is happy with it, that's all that really matters. If I may ask, what did they pay you to do it?

Xiion · Post by **Xiion** » Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:17 am

Ombre wrote:Anyways, about the piece. If the client is happy with it, that's all that really matters. If I may ask, what did they pay you to do it?

i dont think they payed him, but rather gave him a job, to which he will get payed for doing.