2nd Vector Sig

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2nd Vector Sig

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Well, after a full day at school planning, I finally finished my 2nd vectored signature.

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Post by -Legendary- »

Looks good, But the lefti s a little boring. I say add some white lines.
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Post by CabooseJr »

I actually thought the right was missing something.
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Post by MoDFox »

CabooseJr wrote:I actually thought the right was missing something.
Maybe its the fact that everything seems to be leading to the top right corner
and then it just drops to gray?
Thats the only thing thats kinda meh about it,
aside from that though I like it.
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There is something I need to add, I just don't know what it is.
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Post by Munsie »

Try flipping the arrows?
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Post by CabooseJr »

Going Downwards?

If that's the case
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I also moved the arrows closer to Konata a bit so there would be more room uptop.
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Post by Munsie »

That seems to draw the focus towards the render quite a bit more. I like it. Not sure if the top right corner needs anything though.
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Post by CabooseJr »

Then I shall move the arrows a bit more and use it as my current.
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i leik dis ;p
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Very nice. Current = sexy.
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Post by Dr.Cox »

Its not really a Vector Sig.


Says Maca.
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Post by Cuda »

couple things.


Lose the Beveled Arrows and Japanese Script. Too Cheesy IMO. Second, do more in the gray area.
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Post by halobuddha »

Im likin the Vector style sigs caboose. But honestly how many people that put foreign characters in their sigs actually know what it means? I have once but that was in chinese and I am chinese... Plus I knew what it meant. I dont think its cheesy as cuda would say but I think its a bit uhh... "fake"
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halobuddha wrote:But honestly how many people that put foreign characters in their sigs actually know what it means?
My Japanese is a little rusty, but I believe it translates to "eternal love" or something like that.

I liked the red sig better, it just had a much better flow/composition to it than this one does.
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Post by Kirk »

Dr.Cox wrote:Its not really a Vector Sig.


Says Maca.
Looks like a vector sig to me.

I like the left side, the right side needs something more though. Not sure what the arrows are doing there :/
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Post by CabooseJr »

As I said before, there is something missing, I plan to replace the text but I don't know what to put in there.
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Post by Cuda »

how about more vectoring? The Japanese Script is played out as is, just cut it. Just do more that fills the empty space and balances it out more. What more is there to figure out? Try Centering stuff, especially if the focal is to the far left, you left about 2/3 of the sig empty. Sorry, but Arrows don't fill the void. just DO MORE.
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Post by -Legendary- »

Looks good, But the lefti s a little boring. I say add some white lines.
I meant right >______<
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Post by CabooseJr »

I got rid of the arrows and moved the text.

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