Abstract LP all made by hand

[reyer]

I made this yesterday night, then added some more touches later on.

V1:
V2:[/img]

[Keablr]

Needs more color. Don't like the black background

[JK-47]

V2 is a lot better. Nice job :)

[reyer]

V2 is a lot better. Nice job

Thank you, I will be posting a v3 in a while.

I might also do a timeline of it all. I have been recording it.

[SHOUTrvb]

Eh, it's a piece of work for sure. Has a lot of depth, but lacks a ton of symmetry and focal sections. Objects coming out where they shouldn't, shading darker/brighter than it should be, random brushing casting shadows, and highly aliased borders are really the main problems. After that, colors need to be worked on a bit. The piece looks like an alright LP to start with, so really I just recommend working on pieces around that size, looking at more experienced artist's vector works, and not give up. You're on a decent track.

[reyer]

Eh, it's a piece of work for sure. Has a lot of depth, but lacks a ton of symmetry and focal sections. Objects coming out where they shouldn't, shading darker/brighter than it should be, random brushing casting shadows, and highly aliased borders are really the main problems. After that, colors need to be worked on a bit. The piece looks like an alright LP to start with, so really I just recommend working on pieces around that size, looking at more experienced artist's vector works, and not give up. You're on a decent track.

Thanks, I need to learn how to use vectors. I will fix it up using all your comments, then post it once i think i have a better piece.

[-DeToX-]

I cant tell whats going on.

Try to make your text more readable.

The last R at first looks like an F until you see the rest of it... hidden in darkness.

Not bad... but it could be better.

[gh0570fchurch]

The excess space at the bottom bothers me. In fact, there's far too much excess space throughout the whole piece for there to be a defined focal point.

[reyer]

I made it to be a background for my youtube page. So i wanted there to be a big extra space on the bottom.

Here is v3:

[Trulife8342]

holy shit, nice job man, the depth and vector work is great!

[Dr.Cox]

Not really a fan of it.

Its messy and its not very appealing to look at.

[GametagAeonFlux]

The talent is there, but you just need to learn how to apply it...if that makes sense.

[reyer]

Yeah, i really had no idea what i was doing when i made it.

I was just adding stuff randomly, and then i got alittle high, and added alot more.

And it just popped out like this.

I recorded some of it for somereason:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gx6tgxVXDj8

[Dr.Cox]

Yeah, i really had no idea what i was doing when i made it.

I was just adding stuff randomly, and then i got alittle high, and added alot more.

And it just popped out like this.

I recorded some of it for somereason:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gx6tgxVXDj8

Halmods does not condone the use of illegal substances.

[SHOUTrvb]

Yeah, i really had no idea what i was doing when i made it.

I was just adding stuff randomly, and then i got alittle high, and added alot more.

And it just popped out like this.

I recorded some of it for somereason:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gx6tgxVXDj8

Halmods does not condone the use of illegal substances.

You can get high off of perfectly legal substances.. Either way, update is better; though I don't like your layer usage. Shadows under regular shapes? Looks very early 2k. Still, you're getting there. I see a lot of potential.

[halobuddha]

i actually like v1. You should crop v1 a little. That would do it for me.