It's what I expected from a first LP. It's not bad, but the background doesn't match the render. For a render that size, you want to keep the render itself the focal point, but also learn to work up a sexy background to compliment it. From the looks of those guys, I'd say they can put up quite the fight, so have the background reflect something about them. Maybe explosions in the background with people dying all around? Just something to keep it flowing.