cool, i like the feel of it. although i didn't see the figure at first.
9.7-ish/10
ASPARTAME: in your diet soda and artificial sweeteners. also, it's obviously completely safe. it's not like it will cause tumors or anything. >.>
always remember: guilty until proven innocent
maybe move the smokey look a bit more to the right. But at least its not flashing and annoying like your last. (but dang, that was one believeable ad.)