[WIP]Halo 3 Assault rifle

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 6:53 am

well ive been working on my ar got it smoothed and ingame and stuff.

i just cant unwrap the uvw.

if u wanna see my assault rifle ingame this is old but i will try to get newer one in asap just click that link and u get to see me and invader and his sweet sex weapons fight and show em off =P

Cryticfarm · Post by **Cryticfarm** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 9:13 am

Theres some errors.

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 10:04 am

Cryticfarm wrote:Theres some errors.

orly? where?

Cryticfarm · Post by **Cryticfarm** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 1:28 pm

Obvious ones near the flashlight.

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 5:09 pm

*cough*

flyinrooster · Post by **flyinrooster** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 5:10 pm

The flashlight should be rounder and you need to fix the smoothing groups as well. The flashlight right now looks like a chamfered box.

e: I don't like the skin. The scratches are bland and don't look like scratches much at all. It also lacks general detail.

antszy101 · Post by **antszy101** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 6:27 pm

The scratches don't fit the skin at all. It kinda looks like a silver brush stroke that was smudged/blurred. Model looks good, but some areas could use some tidying up. Most notably around the barrel.

click16 · Post by **click16** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 8:10 pm

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Guest · Post by **Guest** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 8:52 pm

i would send u but ur not on aim. thats best way.

edit:
almost done

only 1501 polies also!!!!!
i gave this thing a massive overhaul.

antszy101 · Post by **antszy101** » Sun Mar 02, 2008 4:52 pm

I don't really like the angle of that render, but the model looks very good from what I can tell.

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Sun Mar 02, 2008 4:54 pm

Decent model, good job on it.

As for the skin, the scratches look like scuff marks on leather. Make them thinner, more defined.

preston566 · Post by **preston566** » Sun Mar 02, 2008 5:18 pm

Once again, Damn

InvaderVeex · Post by **InvaderVeex** » Sun Mar 02, 2008 8:35 pm

AND working number plate has been added to newest version sent to me.

it was broke a sec ago...here is a pic of then

fail textures + uvwing by me

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/11/numwo6.jpg

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:27 pm

well i took the time to unwrap uvw since no1 could for me and i liked em.
also i made a way better skin then last time and there is a huge diffrence.
here is a picture.
igonre the unskinned part.

Cryticfarm · Post by **Cryticfarm** » Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:28 pm

Still doesn't look great. Looks blurred over.

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Wed Mar 05, 2008 6:23 pm

Scratches still look like scuff marks. You need to define them more, make them thinner, etc. Right now they look like blobs of great.

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:51 pm

fix those ugly hard edges on the thumb hole of the grip. decent model over all otherwise. as for the skin, start over completely. it's really pretty gross and doesn't define any materials in any way. it's like scuffed blocks of black, white and gray. please learn how to render. fill up the view and render at least 800x600...

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:16 am

Get a better angle, too, right now I can't see anything at all. Though, it's mostly because of the skin blends with the background.

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Thu Apr 03, 2008 10:52 am

finaly got my 3ds max 2008 and remodel retexture and will be getting new animations and stuff.(sry i uploaded from halomods imageshack isnt working for me)

Darkness202 · Post by **Darkness202** » Thu Apr 03, 2008 11:18 am

looks much better now!