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				my new sig render
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:26 am
				by wanksta
				i did this real quick what do you guys think?

 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:15 am
				by Cryticfarm
				3\10
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:50 am
				by SnaFuBAR
				1/10.  spend more time on your next one.  the render is too dark with an unrigged S. Johnson... and the text looks reallly bad.
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 11:35 am
				by wanksta
				it is rigged and theres not much else i could do with it really.
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:14 pm
				by Leiukemia
				There's endless possibilites to be done in a render.
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:41 pm
				by wanksta
				give me one of the so called endless possiblitys. i think im going too make sergent johnson brighter anyways so i might as  well ad something else.. a dead grunt mayber? that might be cool.
by the way... your a really good modeler...
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:50 pm
				by Leiukemia
				Stuff like a background, closer renders, more interesting text. Get stuff that goes together, create a theme. Put some more time into it and you'll get much better results.
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:10 pm
				by wanksta
				ok background.. no
possibly some small text that says something about my specialty... which is AI + scripting. and maybe some more detail  on the sarge probally makeing shooting at a grunt and a elite or something what about that?  

  i think that might be cool
 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:34 pm
				by Cryticfarm
				Your not that good at ai or scripting.
EDIT: Do you even know what firing positions are and how to set up platoons? That took a WHOLE DAY wow....
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:44 pm
				by wanksta
				... and your telling me something about myself.. youve probally only played that dangecanyon mod. that was made in a day. if you want too see my good ai and scripts sign up for my beta (read my sig text)
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:49 pm
				by Cryticfarm
				A WHOLE DAY!
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:55 pm
				by wanksta
				dont be stoopid its not like i sit here all fucking day. i meant as in i started it and finished it within a day
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:41 pm
				by TomClancey
				Cut the crap and stop spamming..
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 4:36 am
				by Cryticfarm
				Fine. The sig is not good at all. You forgot to extrude the text I think in max. You can barely see sergent Johnson. The reason I gave you a 3 is because you didn't just make it  just a peice of text. In conclusion your sig sucks (No offence).
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 9:12 am
				by wanksta
				none taken
most of the criticism i got is constructive and im gonna try and improve it today
im no photo shoper and i dont have much room too make sergent johnson any bigger although the text is extruded dude. its not flat.
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 11:29 am
				by Cryticfarm
				I mean add the extrude modifier in max so it doesn't have the holes.
			 
			
					
				
				Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:49 am
				by llamaboy772
				Sorry, but I also give it a 1/10.  The middle is overly bright while the sides where Johnson is are to dark.  It way to simple, and there is noting really to it.  Add more detail.