my new sig render

wanksta · Post by **wanksta** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:26 am

i did this real quick what do you guys think?

Cryticfarm · Post by **Cryticfarm** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:15 am

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:50 am

1/10. spend more time on your next one. the render is too dark with an unrigged S. Johnson... and the text looks reallly bad.

wanksta · Post by **wanksta** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 11:35 am

it is rigged and theres not much else i could do with it really.

Leiukemia · Post by **Leiukemia** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:14 pm

There's endless possibilites to be done in a render.

wanksta · Post by **wanksta** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:41 pm

give me one of the so called endless possiblitys. i think im going too make sergent johnson brighter anyways so i might as well ad something else.. a dead grunt mayber? that might be cool.

by the way... your a really good modeler...

Leiukemia · Post by **Leiukemia** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:50 pm

Stuff like a background, closer renders, more interesting text. Get stuff that goes together, create a theme. Put some more time into it and you'll get much better results.

wanksta · Post by **wanksta** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:10 pm

ok background.. no
possibly some small text that says something about my specialty... which is AI + scripting. and maybe some more detail on the sarge probally makeing shooting at a grunt and a elite or something what about that?

i think that might be cool

Cryticfarm · Post by **Cryticfarm** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:34 pm

Your not that good at ai or scripting.
EDIT: Do you even know what firing positions are and how to set up platoons? That took a WHOLE DAY wow....

wanksta · Post by **wanksta** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:44 pm

... and your telling me something about myself.. youve probally only played that dangecanyon mod. that was made in a day. if you want too see my good ai and scripts sign up for my beta (read my sig text)

Cryticfarm · Post by **Cryticfarm** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:49 pm

A WHOLE DAY!

wanksta · Post by **wanksta** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:55 pm

dont be stoopid its not like i sit here all fucking day. i meant as in i started it and finished it within a day

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:41 pm

Cut the crap and stop spamming..

Cryticfarm · Post by **Cryticfarm** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 4:36 am

Fine. The sig is not good at all. You forgot to extrude the text I think in max. You can barely see sergent Johnson. The reason I gave you a 3 is because you didn't just make it just a peice of text. In conclusion your sig sucks (No offence).

wanksta · Post by **wanksta** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 9:12 am

none taken
most of the criticism i got is constructive and im gonna try and improve it today

im no photo shoper and i dont have much room too make sergent johnson any bigger although the text is extruded dude. its not flat.

Cryticfarm · Post by **Cryticfarm** » Sun Jun 17, 2007 11:29 am

I mean add the extrude modifier in max so it doesn't have the holes.

llamaboy772 · Post by **llamaboy772** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:49 am

Sorry, but I also give it a 1/10. The middle is overly bright while the sides where Johnson is are to dark. It way to simple, and there is noting really to it. Add more detail.