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one was rendered on black(1st) the other on white(2nd). I want some opinions on all of it and i need suggestions for the material and if the part that holds the big needle looks good(i think that is bad). Oh and yes i did kinda get the idea from Star Wars(the one where they have Leia in the prison cell) :P
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Uhh, this should be in the pictures forum, I believe.

Nice, very detailed. The antenna bothers me, though.
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looks like a death star with two prominent pointy things.
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Post by rentafence »

Cuda wrote:looks like a death star with two prominent pointy things.
Thats exactly what I though when I first saw it.
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Post by Leiukemia »

I don't like it. Also, it looks messy.
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I don't like the use of greeble. It just seems added. And the antena thing is kind ehh, a pulled vert.
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Post by kwazy »

isnt that the thing vader used to inject something into that girl?

*cough* botox injection *cough*
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thats what i was goin for but i havnt seen the movie in awhile .. and it was in the pics fourm but it got moved. I need some help in materials for this, so if anyone knows a good tutorial for materials like texturing and stuff it would be greatly appreciated and some suggestions for the part with the neddle, please.
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Post by OpsY »

that antena is much too big... otherwise, it really looks like you tryed to save polyes by adding some "details" to the sphere
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Post by Diablo65 »

Cuda wrote:looks like a death star with two prominent pointy things.
You shouldn't have said that, because my twisted mind thought it was hillarious. >_>;
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Sorry bronchidus.
Back on topic, I think it looks nice. The spear-ish thing at the front is a little bit long to me, but that's just personal taste. I have no idea what these look like "for real".
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lol its ok and the neddle is upposed to be bi, thats how i remember it in star wars...
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I just don't like because of the simplicity and huge-polly wastage. Its just a greeble with 2 spheres and some pointy pulled vert. It's also very messy and some odd black spots.
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Post by Diablo65 »

I just a vision of one of those orbs gunning down some grunts using it's frontal-mounted machine gun (replaces the spear/needle/pokey tool). :P
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Post by bronchidus »

diablo has an imagination... and it wasnt done i was here asking for suggestions on what could be done and such. I cant finish it anyways because i had to reformat my harddrive due to problems and all i backed up was my documents and this was saved in the 3ds max 7 folder :(
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