RENDER: M8A2A1 Barrett Sniper Rifle

Elite_Green_Devils · Post by **Elite_Green_Devils** » Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:25 pm

here ya go. i hope snaf or caboose will let me in their mod team with this entry.

Leiukemia · Post by **Leiukemia** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 2:27 am

It's hard to look at with such small, crappy renders. It looks like you have the general shape right. But the positioning of your vertices just looks, awkward, in some spots. It's also filled with smooting errors. The rear sight needs to be completely redone, with more attention to detail and shape. The RIS rail on top is too wide, and it looks like you fail to see the way it operates. The scope also lacks detail. The stock is a little bit out of proportion. Could you give a poly count for this thing? It's not a terrible model, but it definantly isn't up to par with modern combat. You should keep practising, and try gmax.

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 4:40 am

Its ok, but I would recomend watching some plane modeling tutorials. You have the general shape but its covered in smoothing errors.

Beretta 9000 Plane Modeling Tutorials

SnaFuBAR · Post by **SnaFuBAR** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:36 am

definately a decent modeler, but you surely need to improve. I'm sorry that we have to say no to you. try to get ahold of gmax and learn with that. it's definately better than milkshape.

keep at it, you're decent. keep practicing and i think you'll do pretty good.

cooldude5990 · Post by **cooldude5990** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 12:19 pm

nice model for milky

TomClancey wrote:Its ok, but I would recomend watching some plane modeling tutorials. You have the general shape but its covered in smoothing errors.

Beretta 9000 Plane Modeling Tutorials

that tutorial is no good for ms3d

TomClancey · Post by **TomClancey** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 12:58 pm

I was implying if he got Gmax he should use that.

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cooldude5990 · Post by **cooldude5990** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:14 pm

oh ok sorry lol, i just got back from a long day at work

Elite_Green_Devils · Post by **Elite_Green_Devils** » Sun Mar 18, 2007 5:27 pm

well actually, i lowered the sight to make it so it would stay out of the way of the scope. and i finished it at 1:00 AM. also(lol) i always use gmax for modeling. i just use milkshape to convert and take pics. i only use gmax for textured pics. and its not finshed