Obviously not meant to be a sig. I'm satisfied with this piece in almost aspect, except for the dashboard part of it--I still don't like it, and honestly I don't think I'm going to come back to this piece, and I don't have the time to devote more work to it either.
Constructive criticism for the future would be greatly appreciated, and any comments you want to share would be tight too.
Another piece
Another piece
Last edited by Lambda on Sun Mar 22, 2009 9:52 am, edited 1 time in total.
softer on the eyes now
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Re: Another piece
I wouldn't change anything, your style is great. I like the minimal colors and graphic novel look.
Re: Another piece
Assuming it's a car, the rear-view mirror is a bit off-putting. Something about it doesn't seem to fit with the piece as a whole, but I can't put my finger on it. Possibly the areas above and below it, they don't seem to fit with how I'd picture the piece fully lit. That said, I still really like the style you use, and it still looks very elegant and good.
Re: Another piece
This is what the mirror looks like:
Re: Another piece
That's exactly what I was thinking. It looks like Bad Robot.
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Until Tural said something about a car, it looked like the guy was sitting at a desk confronting the "Bad Robot".
Now that I can see what it is, it looks very good. Your style is really cool.
Now that I can see what it is, it looks very good. Your style is really cool.
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Re: Another piece
The arm is very good. I knew what it was the moment I saw it. The hand that is holding the steering wheel Is nice as well..but I think you need to add a little to the bottom of it..to the thumb knuckle I think.
Other than that every thing else needs to be tweeked to help with "what is being" seen...unless of course this is what your are looking for.
Other than that every thing else needs to be tweeked to help with "what is being" seen...unless of course this is what your are looking for.
That is a pity. There is much potential in this. It can be so much more then just scrap.Lambda wrote: I don't think I'm going to come back to this piece, and I don't have the time to devote more work to it either.
"You know what I'd like to be? I mean if I had my goddamn choice, I'd just be the catcher in the rye and all."
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Thanks for all the comments, they're greatly appreciated.
I'll probably end up doing something (somethings?) over Summer break.
I know, but I just don't have the time spend on it that I'd like to have. I only had the time to work on it because I was sick and out of school for two days.INSANEdrive wrote: That is a pity. There is much potential in this. It can be so much more then just scrap.
I'll probably end up doing something (somethings?) over Summer break.
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I like your style and ability to detail a lot, but this image just doesn't get the image across right.