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Another piece

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Obviously not meant to be a sig. I'm satisfied with this piece in almost aspect, except for the dashboard part of it--I still don't like it, and honestly I don't think I'm going to come back to this piece, and I don't have the time to devote more work to it either.
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Constructive criticism for the future would be greatly appreciated, and any comments you want to share would be tight too.
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I wouldn't change anything, your style is great. I like the minimal colors and graphic novel look.
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Re: Another piece

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Assuming it's a car, the rear-view mirror is a bit off-putting. Something about it doesn't seem to fit with the piece as a whole, but I can't put my finger on it. Possibly the areas above and below it, they don't seem to fit with how I'd picture the piece fully lit. That said, I still really like the style you use, and it still looks very elegant and good.
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This is what the mirror looks like:

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Re: Another piece

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That's exactly what I was thinking. It looks like Bad Robot.
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Until Tural said something about a car, it looked like the guy was sitting at a desk confronting the "Bad Robot".

Now that I can see what it is, it looks very good. Your style is really cool.
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The arm is very good. I knew what it was the moment I saw it. The hand that is holding the steering wheel Is nice as well..but I think you need to add a little to the bottom of it..to the thumb knuckle I think.

Other than that every thing else needs to be tweeked to help with "what is being" seen...unless of course this is what your are looking for.
Lambda wrote: I don't think I'm going to come back to this piece, and I don't have the time to devote more work to it either.
That is a pity. There is much potential in this. It can be so much more then just scrap.
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Re: Another piece

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Thanks for all the comments, they're greatly appreciated.
INSANEdrive wrote: That is a pity. There is much potential in this. It can be so much more then just scrap.
I know, but I just don't have the time spend on it that I'd like to have. I only had the time to work on it because I was sick and out of school for two days.
I'll probably end up doing something (somethings?) over Summer break.
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I like your style and ability to detail a lot, but this image just doesn't get the image across right.
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