another attempt (UPDATED)

[diamondbackk60]

well here is a new attempt at a decent piece of workk.. simple but i thinkk lookks good



UPDATE!!

new attempt at something decent





comments and crit are welcome thanks

[JK-47]

I'm not liking the font very much. The gradient just looks bad.
Fix up the font a bit. You've got a good idea.

[SHOUTrvb]

It's very tacky.. You'd get some serious web-design props if were will still in mid-90s internet, but I just can't approve considering today's standards. In other words, what JK said. You're getting better though.

[RaVNzCRoFT]

The reflection is very unnecessary, especially since several letters in your username are different letters when flipped upside-down. The "N" in that font, for example, looks like a "U" when flipped. Bad font choice to begin with, but the reflection shouldn't be there.

For the signature as a whole: Not necessarily a bad concept, but the execution is quite poor. An all-white background certainly wasn't the way to go.

[Cuda]

Yeah, the letter reflection wasn't the right way to go, and reads like DIAWOUDBUCKK PO.
The Alien head's shadowing and reflections contrast a bit, and I don't know why you made the shadow a negative, it just reads weird.

[diamondbackk60]

updated with a new sig 2 versions of it let me know what u think

[WaeV]

Where is the render's right shoulder? I like it except for the render in general, but something needs to be there. Maybe a different render? If you moved the background to fit the rule of thirds you could get away without one.

Also, use .png

[Cuda]

Yeah, the entire sig seems very empty, and I don't really see the necessity of the big white boxes going across the entire thing. You've got to do a bit more with the space given.

[diamondbackk60]

about the shoulder thing that is his collar on his jacket it covers his shoulder.. and two i used a png and 3 i dono what else to do with the space lol

[RaVNzCRoFT]

You should definitely change the render so that doesn't look weird.

[SHOUTrvb]

New one looks fine.

[DrXThirst]

Maybe put your name in the white line/space?

[JK-47]

Another thing I've noticed is you're using pretty big boarders. Try to keep them smaller, 1px is the standard.