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DB60 metal final..
Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:01 pm
by diamondbackk60
My latest production i cant really do much more with this one give me your advise and comments plz..
Construct Crit please no flaming
thank you
DIAMONDBACKK60
thanks for your help
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Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:04 pm
by JK-47
That's actually very convincing. Awesome job.
I'm not really feeling the plain black areas where the cracks are. It kind of makes me feel that the wall is just a really thin layer that's in front of a really dark room or something, it doesn't make me think that the wall has any depth.
You did good on the cracks, but there's just kind of a blank feeling with them.
Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:06 pm
by diamondbackk60
i was thinkin of maybe a light sourse behind the wall or something.. not sure
Posted: Fri Jan 23, 2009 3:16 am
by CabooseJr
I'm not really a fan of the repeating scratches found by the "D" also the scratch on "B" could use a little working on.