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Talent T.V. Flyer
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 4:32 pm
by Trulife8342
A company that I am doing graphics for (if you live in south florida you'll see these posted up everywhere)
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:12 pm
by CabooseJr
I don't really like the name of it. "Make is happen." It sounds corny.
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:22 pm
by Trulife8342
thats their motto they said they wanted it there.
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:05 pm
by MoDFox
It's hard working with companies, they set guidelines, and you HAVE to follow the guidelines or you may get fired.
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:44 pm
by halobuddha
true but all corny mottos aside its nice work. Really pleasing.
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:54 pm
by GametagAeonFlux
Something about it just doesn't really feel...professional.
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:55 pm
by Tural
It's not contrasted enough. It's all faint and such. It doesn't really strike me as a professional ad.
Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:05 pm
by Aumaan Anubis
The grammar in the top part of the ad annoys me...
"If you have the looks and the talent that it takes to be a model you need to come to Make it Happen productions and have your world changed"
Punctuation plz?
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:45 am
by Trulife8342
its just a flyer just like when a club passes out those little promotions and shit this is the same thing, and the text was just a place holder they will modify that so forget the text, but everything else was exactly how they wanted it.
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 12:27 pm
by Ombre
Those all your vectors?
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 12:50 pm
by Trulife8342
No I have more, and if your asking if they belong to me no, the ones that do are the ones on the lower left corner, And I also asked permission so no need to jump on me for that.
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 12:59 pm
by WaywornMmmmm
Tural wrote:It's not contrasted enough. It's all faint and such. It doesn't really strike me as a professional ad.
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:26 pm
by Dr.Cox
I cant see this being on the streets it looks to busy. Your drawing attention away from the real advertisement with pretty vectors and colours.
Oh, and in my opinion, the flyer needs to represent what its advertising.
It needs a Hot bod on there or something that represents the company.
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:41 pm
by JacksonCougAr
It strongly reminds me of the Zune software.
I agree that it does not really give you a good idea of what it should be representing. I at first thought it was about computer modelling.
Also the text in the middle is very funny looking, and all in all the attention is not being drawn to the text but instead the vectors.
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:24 pm
by Cuda
Whatevs. It's probably for some Wict out Glamour shots place where they hide all their mistakes by making it super foggy like the Barbara Walters Shots. And Since when do you need Talent for Modeling?
All seriousness now, The font Choice. The key rule is try to minimize the amount of typefaces used(Maximum 3). The All Caps and the "Modeling" part make it look like two different fonts, and it just doesn't seem right.
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:36 pm
by preston566
Looks cool to me. Well, then again, it's me.
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:39 pm
by Ombre
Cuda wrote:And Since when do you need Talent for Modeling?
There are methods to sticking your fingers down your throat, it takes practice and great patience.
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 6:21 pm
by Cuda
Ombre wrote:Cuda wrote:And Since when do you need Talent for Modeling?
There are methods to sticking your fingers down your throat, it takes practice and great patience.
Heh, from what I've been told by one of the girls Water Polo players, a Sponge on a stick works too.
Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 11:03 pm
by Ombre
Anyways, about the piece. If the client is happy with it, that's all that really matters. If I may ask, what did they pay you to do it?
Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:17 am
by Xiion
Ombre wrote:Anyways, about the piece. If the client is happy with it, that's all that really matters. If I may ask, what did they pay you to do it?
i dont think they payed him, but rather gave him a job, to which he will get payed for doing.