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I drew the mongoose today to add to the collection and it's also going to be used in my next project...Anyway. I want you guys to rate it. I don't really feel its that good for some reason. Can you guys help me out/ Critique it and tell me if its bad, or somehow even good. I just wanna know how to improve upon it (or if I need to).

If you're going to critique the detail: It would be much appreciated if you guys can point me in the right direction on techniques to add detail...As clearly, I am a noob on this part. The mongoose is actually really scratched/gritty so yeah, any help is great





Thanks

PS: rating it based off the shadow cutoff line will result in...nothing at all...I'm not staff hehe

edit: ahh lets have one with the MC on there for fun times:

It looks great actually.

But the MC is not proportionate to the mongoose, because he looks like a child in it.

Yeah it's kinda huge. Windshield doesn't really work either. Needs a few plates and such around. Original textures here and there..

Looks good but I don't like those random lines on the texture

unknownv2 wrote:It looks great actually.

But the MC is not proportionate to the mongoose, because he looks like a child in it.

It is too big compared to MC, and the lines kind of look like they follow a path. But aside from that it looks pretty nice.

haha thats awesome ScottyGEE
but maybe just a lil bit smaller ^_^
9.5/10

Looks great to me, just a tad too big.

Looks reallyyyy nice Gee, great job

Thanks guys, lets not be commenting on the poor size of the MC anymore though...Only coz I'm more concerned about the mongoose texturing really.

I'll try and do more with the windshield shout, thanks

I like the window on it.