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2nd Vector Sig

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:11 pm
by CabooseJr
Well, after a full day at school planning, I finally finished my 2nd vectored signature.

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Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:13 pm
by -Legendary-
Looks good, But the lefti s a little boring. I say add some white lines.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:21 pm
by CabooseJr
I actually thought the right was missing something.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:28 pm
by MoDFox
CabooseJr wrote:I actually thought the right was missing something.
Maybe its the fact that everything seems to be leading to the top right corner
and then it just drops to gray?
Thats the only thing thats kinda meh about it,
aside from that though I like it.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:30 pm
by CabooseJr
There is something I need to add, I just don't know what it is.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:35 pm
by Munsie
Try flipping the arrows?

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:38 pm
by CabooseJr
Going Downwards?

If that's the case
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I also moved the arrows closer to Konata a bit so there would be more room uptop.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:58 pm
by Munsie
That seems to draw the focus towards the render quite a bit more. I like it. Not sure if the top right corner needs anything though.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 6:59 pm
by CabooseJr
Then I shall move the arrows a bit more and use it as my current.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:42 pm
by G.I.R.
i leik dis ;p

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:43 pm
by Munsie
Very nice. Current = sexy.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 8:59 pm
by Dr.Cox
Its not really a Vector Sig.


Says Maca.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 9:18 pm
by Cuda
couple things.


Lose the Beveled Arrows and Japanese Script. Too Cheesy IMO. Second, do more in the gray area.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 10:51 pm
by halobuddha
Im likin the Vector style sigs caboose. But honestly how many people that put foreign characters in their sigs actually know what it means? I have once but that was in chinese and I am chinese... Plus I knew what it meant. I dont think its cheesy as cuda would say but I think its a bit uhh... "fake"

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 10:55 pm
by GametagAeonFlux
halobuddha wrote:But honestly how many people that put foreign characters in their sigs actually know what it means?
My Japanese is a little rusty, but I believe it translates to "eternal love" or something like that.

I liked the red sig better, it just had a much better flow/composition to it than this one does.

Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 11:50 pm
by Kirk
Dr.Cox wrote:Its not really a Vector Sig.


Says Maca.
Looks like a vector sig to me.

I like the left side, the right side needs something more though. Not sure what the arrows are doing there :/

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 3:31 am
by CabooseJr
As I said before, there is something missing, I plan to replace the text but I don't know what to put in there.

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 1:06 pm
by Cuda
how about more vectoring? The Japanese Script is played out as is, just cut it. Just do more that fills the empty space and balances it out more. What more is there to figure out? Try Centering stuff, especially if the focal is to the far left, you left about 2/3 of the sig empty. Sorry, but Arrows don't fill the void. just DO MORE.

Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 1:56 pm
by -Legendary-
Looks good, But the lefti s a little boring. I say add some white lines.
I meant right >______<

Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:14 am
by CabooseJr
I got rid of the arrows and moved the text.

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