HaloMods "Classic" Read-only Archive

http://pepness.net/junk/paper3.png

-Iz proud of this one. (zoom in and be patient, it will load.) [Edit: as seen in Pepsi's sig (it got cropped) ]
Original picture: http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h180/ ... aceful.jpg

http://pepness.net/junk/luigipaper.png

-Made it for a fellow Luigi fangirl, I'm aware itz filled with flares and random brushes in places, but I'm asking for C&C on the general outcome. I had a bit too much fun ^-^

They look really nice. But on the Luigi one since you flipped Luigi you need to fix the "L" on his hat to be the right way. Other than that I like them.

I already knew about the flipped L. ;]

ppppppppp. perdy =]

Ha ha, Okay Nessa just making sure.

The first one doesn't seem like much, just the stock with a few adjustments and the second one seems really messy, the two renders don't work together.

The stock in the first is kind of gross, because first of all you stretched it from it's original size, and second its just weird colors. And since you did so little to it, the crumminess of said stock is very apparent. The second, like Sarb said, is very messy, and the renders just don't work.

i like them all really and i have no idea what to say to critique cause i really dont know what to critique oh and nice care bear!
care bears rock! im a guy too!

super_man916 wrote:im a guy too!

That's nice.

The first one is alright, the flower on the bottom right corner looks a little odd. Other than that, its ok.
The Luigi one isn't very good. It's too busy and a little messy. I don't know what to focus on.