a few pictures i made for my grad project

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a few pictures i made for my grad project

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C&C por favor.
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Planet is Cut Bad...
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I swear I remember seeing the second stock somewhere.
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JacksonCougAr wrote:Planet is Cut Bad...
planet is cut just perfect. wtf are you talking about??
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I see nothing wrong with the planet as well.
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I think he just means it looks out of place.
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Dsoup wrote:I swear I remember seeing the second stock somewhere.
I think he posted it a while back, with a glow effect or something.
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Post by MoDFox »

Maybe this is what they're talking about?


http://screencast.com/t/dModrpywfvB
Very Small, but if you look.

not sure, but the photo doesn't look too bad.
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thanks guys....

anything i should improve on?
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Planet needs a slight outer/inner glow.
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planet is made of glass :D
j/k but starts shouldn't be visible behind it
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good eye alexei i didnt see it.

i guess my eye isnt trained as well as yours.
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Underdog wrote:good eye alexei i didnt see it.

i guess my eye isnt trained as well as yours.
hehe
one gets accustomed to thing after a while

having spent literally hundreds of hours making sure ones own image has no such things it becomes a half reflex :P
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Post by Cryticfarm »

Yes, alexei has become a master at this kinds of stuffs.
The planet one looks ok, but it needs a glow. And the rain drops are to big lol.
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Why can I see stars on the planet? Is it really that big?
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Post by halobuddha »

Indeed the planet needs to be blended much better. The cut is pretty much ok except for one little nub on the left side of it. The second one could use a little bit more contrast but other than that i really like the second
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