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Proof

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:04 am
by halobuddha
First time using a C4D. As usual comments, ratings, and suggestions are welcome( As long as their mature and helpful ).


Image

Should I current it? and someone please respond this time...

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:43 am
by Aumaan Anubis
It looks allright, but it becomes too dark at the top left, obscuring too much of the text.

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:08 pm
by halobuddha
I did that on purpose but I couldnt make the gradeint softer...

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:13 pm
by GametagAeonFlux
It looks pretty cool, although you could have just made the gradient on another layer and adjusted that layer's opacity. :P

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:51 pm
by Patrickssj6
Looks very Aliased...even parts of the render.

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 4:27 pm
by halobuddha
ahh... your right just noticed that. I shoulda used a better render :( and i tried to blur the text a little to mask the aliasing. But it didnt really work. but should i current it?

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 4:32 pm
by Patrickssj6
Redo it. The background is quite nice if it would look more clean and higher quality. :wink:

Then current.

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 8:10 pm
by halobuddha
k and ill take that suggestion with the text.

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:31 pm
by RaVNzCRoFT
It just seems bland, like there's nothing particularly impressive about it.

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:37 pm
by halobuddha
i know what you mean but my skill in photoshop isnt at that point yet.

Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 10:57 pm
by RaVNzCRoFT
Isn't at what point yet? Your skills are not developed enough to create anything that is impressive or not bland? Then that's something you should be working on.

Posted: Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:03 am
by HPDarkness
It's ok, The colors are good. I've never been inside an Abercrombie's before. So I have no idea what cologne this is.

Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 10:53 am
by halobuddha
i am trying to work on creating something interesting but it takes time.

Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 1:03 pm
by plushiefire
Looks 3d, I really like it, besides that gaping hole of black in hte left side (no offense) :D

Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 6:31 pm
by halobuddha
yeah i think i went to far with the black