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Spartan
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:27 pm
by Sarb
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:54 pm
by Trulife8342
Your almost there bud, Get rid of the glow thing and then repost see how it comes out.
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:02 pm
by Ragdoll
sarb, i love your style. great job on this it looks good.
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:18 pm
by Yoda117
i dont like it when you make it look so dull and splatery. it ruines it. make it look really awsome instead paint splats.
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:30 pm
by Danke
Yeah, that glow is killing everything.
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:31 pm
by reanimation-06
try some new styles...
7.5/10...
splats are too messy along with sig
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:47 pm
by -DeToX-
What masta Danke said.
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:49 pm
by Sarb
lolfixed
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 6:50 pm
by -DeToX-
The spartan text should be a little less hidden(a different color or the location (put it over some of the splatters) would help.. And to be honest I don't like it much.
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:40 pm
by Sgt.Peppers
It looks aliased, other than that, I think it's pretty cool.
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 7:49 pm
by Dsoup
The spartan just doesn't fit the sig very well.
Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 12:38 am
by maca_ยง
Love all of it.
Especially the style but especially how it almost looks how the MC is somewhat melting.
Oh and especially the colouring.
Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 3:29 am
by Sarb
Change:

Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 7:41 am
by Trulife8342
Win. You got it bud.
Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 12:13 pm
by Sarb
Thanks =D
Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 12:38 pm
by CptnNsan0
I don't really like it. Everything just looks slapped on there. That might have been what you were going for, but to me it just looks sloppy.
Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 3:39 pm
by Hawaiian Modder
CptnNsan0 wrote:I don't really like it. Everything just looks slapped on there. That might have been what you were going for, but to me it just looks sloppy.
Unfortunately, Me dos.
