Bloody Moon i used a TUT

Dagger13 · Post by **Dagger13** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 1:48 pm

well here it is plz rate x/10

D4rkFire · Post by **D4rkFire** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 1:55 pm

I like it a lot, good job

8/10.

JK-47 · Post by **JK-47** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 2:33 pm

The background seems dull, and there's too many brighter stars. And there seems to be a hard line around the planet (you can see it where the sun shines on it the most). And, the change from the normal moon to the bloody part of it seems a little abrupt. You should try to make it a little more gradual. Also, in the top left hand corner of the image, I can see clearly that you clone brushed it by the repeditive-ness of the star cluster. Try to hide that a little bit.

Other than that, it's good.
7/10

Dsoup · Post by **Dsoup** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 3:06 pm

The glowing around the moon makes it look just plastered on there. It looks bad, and considering you even used a tut, 3/10.

reanimation-06 · Post by **reanimation-06** » Sun Sep 09, 2007 5:16 pm

looks nice, but I agree with all the above coments.. and can u link me to the tut? i would be thankful!

Alexei · Post by **Alexei** » Mon Sep 10, 2007 10:12 am

well
for a TUT image its more than passable
but u have to remember that starts are distant suns, here they look brushed on. they dont have solid white in the middle like a star would.
and its abit overkill with the stars too imho. lower the number, increase the brightness. and maybe decrease the size some and itll be much better

HK-47 · Post by **HK-47** » Tue Sep 11, 2007 10:58 am

I like the Lighting sort of, but theres too many visible errors on its Rim

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Dagger13 · Post by **Dagger13** » Tue Sep 11, 2007 2:43 pm

thx guys do u think this is better?

GametagAeonFlux · Post by **GametagAeonFlux** » Tue Sep 11, 2007 2:45 pm

The lens flare and the stars in general are just disgusting.

Rockymods · Post by **Rockymods** » Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:06 pm

I thought it looked cool... After looking at it closer I still like the planet but the stars truly need to be changed.

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:52 pm

reminds me of technology, looks kick ass none the less.

Dsoup · Post by **Dsoup** » Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:56 pm

I don't like either of them, the stars are still just paint splotches that have nothing to do with the red planet and the lens flare.

SHOUTrvb · Post by **SHOUTrvb** » Tue Sep 11, 2007 7:00 pm

Planet looks good. You're moving along well being that this was one your first.