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Sarb




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Post by Sarb »

Xiion wrote:
Ombre wrote:Anyways, about the piece. If the client is happy with it, that's all that really matters. If I may ask, what did they pay you to do it?
i dont think they payed him, but rather gave him a job, to which he will get payed for doing.
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I don't really like this Tru, doesn't look proffesional, the BG pic also doesn't seem to nice. Also, I really dislike how the vectors fade out and the ends, looks gross IMO.
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Post by Trulife8342 »

they gave me a job, and I agree with you guys I was just showing some work I did, I mean I would have done a hell of a lot different I just didnt have artistic freedom at all. But yeah w/e.
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Post by neodos »

Yeah it's easy to say "it doesn't look pro" but at least you could then give a little big of help.

Imo what doesn't make it look pro is a bad choice of typography, the bloom around it and the vectorials not enough contrasted also everything needs to be aligned to the grid on ps.
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Post by HPDarkness »

You've got the basic design down nicely. It's very eye catching, but something about those fonts is just turning me off. Also it could use just a tiny bit more contrast. Other than that, It's wonderful.
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